A 4th Grade Persuasive Speech
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Prompt: To get a boy to go out with me
Intro:
Dear Zac (AN: Hanson),
I know a million girls have crushes on you and to you I’m just another girl. But I would like it very much If you would personaly read these reasons why you should go out with me.

Brainstorm:
1. You’d get a brake
2. You’d see what girls are really like
3. You’ve have someone to talk to
4. You know someone really cares
5. I wouldn’t scream

I then did three brainstorming clouds.

1. You’d Get a Brake
a. No one would be telling you what to do
b. your probably tired from practicing, touring, & recording
c. you’d get to rest from practicing, touring, & recording

2. You’d see what Girls are really Like
a. You’d see how to get to a girl you like’s heart
b. you could wow your bros with how much u know about girls
c. you’d see that girls aren’t always so love struck (AN: that goes against everything else I say)

3. You’d Know Some One Really Cares
a. That you can trust some girls (AN: but not most)
b. That some girls search for more than looks and you got it all
c. That I don’t just like you because you are famouse and cute

Conc.
Now I know I’m just another fan and you probably didn’t read my letter but I guess if your reading my conclusion you must have read it. Please write back.
Sincerely, Me

Written: Age 10
Who knew nine years later I would be a national-qualifying speaker, haha
And no, it did not persuade him to go out with me . . .

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